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Miscellaneous => Battlefield => BF 1942 => Topic started by: End on November 07, 2008, 10:42:07 AM
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This is after I was kicked from the server, because I wouldn't join the clan. They like to do this thing to me, where everytime I come in, I get pressured to join the clan, and if I don't join, I get kicked for some bullshit reason. But whatever, I still own them all, that's all that matters.
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This is after I was kicked from the server, because I wouldn't join the clan. They like to do this thing to me, where everytime I come in, I get pressured to join the clan, and if I don't join, I get kicked for some bullshit reason. But whatever, I still own them all, that's all that matters.
Wowza ..... good score buddy , you got kicked today ??
I think i saw you get kicked last night 2 !!!
Bet it was your mouth that got u in touble ( fuck this , fuck that ).
Hahahahahahaha ha ........... i miss glitching ::) & cussing ::) !!!
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Nice score camper :laugh:
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Well Done! ;)
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Strong work there End.
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Good stuff end.
I managed to own the main Fox's heads again today by myself lol. Not a massive score but meh 4 fighters on your ass at all times *MAFIA* won that's what counts.
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z44/Dune79wooo/DuneVfoxs.jpg
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*MAFIA* always wins, even if you lose.
But yeah, FOXES server gets a bit boring after a while simply because there are little to no good players on besides myself.
So that's why I get a bit excited when a *MAFIA* hops on with me, makes it a bit more fun. Other than that, I rape that entire server, all day, everyday. :D
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*MAFIA* always wins, even if you lose.
But yeah, FOXES server gets a bit boring after a while simply because there are little to no good players on besides myself.
So that's why I get a bit excited when a *MAFIA* hops on with me, makes it a bit more fun. Other than that, I rape that entire server, all day, everyday. :D
Yup ..... he kick's ASS !!!
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*MAFIA* always wins, even if you lose.
But yeah, FOXES server gets a bit boring after a while simply because there are little to no good players on besides myself.
So that's why I get a bit excited when a *MAFIA* hops on with me, makes it a bit more fun. Other than that, I rape that entire server, all day, everyday. :D
If you arent happy, I can Bann you as that you cant say it's boring, and There are many players who are good. I don't want start a problems with you. We saw you always have beeing angry as "Fail" etc .. So Take care.
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This is after I was kicked from the server, because I wouldn't join the clan. They like to do this thing to me, where everytime I come in, I get pressured to join the clan, and if I don't join, I get kicked for some bullshit reason. But whatever, I still own them all, that's all that matters.
OMG 17 suicides?! You really suck... ;)
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End, Ricardo is correct in one way. I've played many times against you and everytime someone kills you, you keep saying "FAIL." If you want people to stop making fun of you or hate you, you should probably stop saying that, seeing as how your score is generally lower than the person who killed you.
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If I kill Cheero 2x in a row, spawns, sits there, translates "are you targeting me Loaded".
LOL can't use a different name on that server I swear they have everyone's IP and key hash written down and check everyone. I even have used other keys hashes and they still know it is me. Just try it, get a good score going and I bet they will say who you really are in minutes.
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If you arent happy, I can Bann you as that you cant say it's boring, and There are many players who are good. I don't want start a problems with you. We saw you always have beeing angry as "Fail" etc .. So Take care.
Ricardo, Banning somebody because they state the truth about your site on a different forum is absolute Admin abuse and quit frankly it shows your immaturity and insecurity. This is the main reason nobody has any respect for you here and in your own clan, Yes I have talk to your fellow members and many have stated this. The only reason they pretend to like you is they want to advance in your clan. This is all fact, I am not fabricating any of this up. Your actions are more like a 10 year old spoiled brat. Stop acting like a silver spoon baby and grow up.
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End, Ricardo is correct in one way. I've played many times against you and everytime someone kills you, you keep saying "FAIL." If you want people to stop making fun of you or hate you, you should probably stop saying that, seeing as how your score is generally lower than the person who killed you.
Yup .... he seems 2 like that word !!
You sound like a kid when you say that the whole game !!!
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Ricardo, Banning somebody because they state the truth about your site on a different forum is absolute Admin abuse and quit frankly the shows your immaturity and insecurity. This is the main reason nobody has any respect for you here and in your own clan, Yes I have talk to your fellow members and many have stated this. The only reason they pretend to like you is they want to advance in your clan. This is all fact, I am not fabricating any of this up. Your actions are more like a 10 year old spoiled brat. Stop acting like a silver spoon baby and grow up.
Listen 2 Manowar Ricardo ..... got 2 get off that power trip !!
Don't get mad & kick or ban ......... GET EVEN !!! I've been Admin
on many servers , you can never let the POWER get 2 your head .
That's only if you want 2 become a good Admin & earn the respect of
player's that come on your server !!
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Well Rosh I appreciate your point of view, but I mostly do the fail thing as a joke, I thought that was obvious. xD
Just to make things a bit more fun, because you have to admit, it gets you guys going, and I love that. :P
I guess I can tone it down a bit, but just having some harmless fun.
And about my score generally being lower than the person who killed me..I don't recall a whole lot when I've lost to someone on FOXES unless I come into the game late..I know when you're in there you piss me off, but that's all in good fun. xD
Just having some fun guys, but if you advise I tone it down, I can do that.
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Good stuff end.
I managed to own the main Fox's heads again today by myself lol. Not a massive score but meh 4 fighters on your ass at all times *MAFIA* won that's what counts.
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z44/Dune79wooo/DuneVfoxs.jpg
Nice Dune .........
I'm moving up the FOXES stats some !!!
Player Name:
*MAFIA* Hawaii-50
Rank on Game Server: 9th out of 20,428
9. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 7000
13. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 5947
16. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 4996
20. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 4671
22. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 4012
24. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 3776
27. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 3644
31. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 3406
36. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 3162
37. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 3026
39. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 2934
40. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 2813
41. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 2795
43. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 2655
48. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 2547
49. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 2525
50. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 2467
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Nah it's cool. It's what makes you, you. Everyone needs to have their own personality. Oh btw, that person is usually me. lol
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Yeah I figured that Rosh. xD
But yeah decided I'll post a few more of my decent scores.
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Few more.
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lol plz post whole score boards next time...
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Uhh..I don't know why you would want the entire scoreboard, but ok..I guess I can start doing that..I just figured you'd want the top three. xD
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Uhh..I don't know why you would want the entire scoreboard, but ok..I guess I can start doing that..I just figured you'd want the top three. xD
Because your scores are pointless if you have only 4 other people on the server.
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Gotcha..But I usually don't play unless there are 15+..But I get your point..I'll start screenie'ing the whole page then. :D
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lol plz post whole score boards next time...
Here you go...
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Ah, thanks for posting that man. :D
See, my scores aren't pointless. :(
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Bots.
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You caught me. :(
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I have gotten 4 different key hashes banned so I know what Loaded is talking about. They sit there and check everyone who is good info. What a bunch of faggots. They all need to get a fucking life. Oh and what ever happen to their forums??? ;)
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I have gotten 4 different key hashes banned so I know what Loaded is talking about. They sit there and check everyone who is good info. What a bunch of faggots. They all need to get a fucking life. Oh and what ever happen to their forums??? ;)
It's you who hacked our forum?
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It's you who hacked our forum?
No, I don't know how to do that. If I knew how to hack, I would have hacked your server and got unbanned! LOL. I wish I knew how to do it.
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It's easy. Haven't you noticed this big, flasshy, red button, which says "Hack this site now!" on their forums...? ::)
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Nice Dune .........
I'm moving up the FOXES stats some !!!
Player Name:
*MAFIA* Hawaii-50
Rank on Game Server: 24th out of 19,812
24. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 3776
27. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 3644
31. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 3406
36. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 3162
37. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 3026
39. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 2934
40. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 2813
41. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 2795
43. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 2655
48. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 2547
49. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 2525
50. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 2467
And still moving up the ladder !!!
13. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 5947
Rank on Game Server: 13th out of 20,025
And Dammm ... they hit 20,000 :o
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I am still banned! :-\
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I am still banned! :-\
Don't know why ??
You been a very good boy !!!
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I was told I'm never being unbanned, roflcopters.
Oh well. They want to be immature about it, I'll let them.
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Don't know why ??
You been a very good boy !!!
I know. I have tried and tried, many times to make peace. It seems as if I failed. :'(
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Well Hell, if you have the same luck I've been having, you probably won't be unbanned. :(
I think we did our part to be civil about this mess, amirite? They just wanted to be immature about it I guess, idk.
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i can get you unbanned :) but you have to be nice to me ;)
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i can get you unbanned :) but you have to be nice to me ;)
Refer to the thread about me!@!!
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Yah .............. .......... finally made it 2 the Top 10 :o
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Rank Name Score Time Played
1. ¥FOXES¥ Cheero 16041 352.68 hr
2. -[SL]- Le Stroumphe 13518 403.57 hr
3. ¥FOXES¥ Payne 10913 195.95 hr
4. ¥FOXES¥ Waffleboy 10261 123.78 hr
5. ¥FOXES¥ EaSyCoMpAnY 8083 111.62 hr
6. -[SL]- PaTcHaLiNo 8036 192.6 hr
7. ¥FOXES¥ Ricardo 7834 117.47 hr
8. £nd 7217 70.4 hr
9. -[SL]- Major 6667 149.47 hr
10. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 6634 155.58 hr
Dammmm ... look at End's , only 70 hours & he's in 8th. ,
bet he would have been way up there if his mouth did'nt
get him banned . hehehehe
And i do play around alot , show player's some tricks
and things .
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Yeah..Unfortun ately I was told I'm never being unbanned for "lying" or something. Cheero said I lied about the reason I got banned or something, idk. So that kind of sucks, but grats on making it to the top 10 old fart. :D
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Stop to talk about that. End your a bad liar! So You're bann and Stop to cry here .
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Stop to talk about that. End your a bad liar! So You're bann and Stop to cry here .
Childish reasons, by child like admins. Same for Hellraiser. When\if you and Cheero mature enough to realize your just asinine in your attitudes and unban these two I will grace your site with my presence. But until you do I will not play on your server anymore. It is idiotic that a person has to walk on egg shells and kiss yours and Cheero's ass just to keep from getting banned. Well Ricardo, Cheero you have just lost a hell of a fun player. I doubt I am the first nor do I doubt I'll be the last to leave your site.
Self Ban starting...... .............. ..now.
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don't feel bad i was banned as soon as i joined the game lol
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Rofl. Can I see any proof of ANYTHING I lied about? Go ahead, take as long as you need Retardo, I'll wait. Show me ANY FORM of proof that I lied about anything, ever.
I can wait. ^^
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still banned...
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grats on making it to the top 10 old fart. :D
Thanks ....... #5 now :o
1. ¥FOXES¥ Cheero 16572
2. -[SL]- Le Stroumphe 13518
3. ¥FOXES¥ Payne 10913
4. ¥FOXES¥ Waffleboy 10690
5. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 8888
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Rock on Hawaii xD !!
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its amazing how some ppl just cant accept that they are nubs and just because they have admin they can make all the good players leave their lil world of GAY but hey oh well eventually there will be no one but them selves and that would get boring.....
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so afther what you say , it is not neccessary to play with us. You'll get bored. ;D
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ouch... Ricardo burn :o
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Rock on Hawaii xD !!
O yeah !!
http://www.gametracker.com/server_info/208.167.227.101:14567/top_players/?per_page=10
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its amazing how some ppl just cant accept that they are nubs and just because they have admin they can make all the good players leave their lil world of GAY but hey oh well eventually there will be no one but them selves and that would get boring.....
Gotta support you there!!
So tired of admins that abuses their rights!! Some mafian's does too! (Wont mention names)
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O yeah !!
http://www.gametracker.com/server_info/208.167.227.101:14567/top_players/?per_page=10
I just wanna say. HAWAII = 24/24 ON OUR SERVER :P
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I just wanna say. HAWAII = 24/24 ON OUR SERVER :P
Not much longer, and that is all I am gonna say on that one. I think I will get on and play a little tonight.
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Not much longer, and that is all I am gonna say on that one. I think I will get on and play a little tonight.
Hahahahaha ..... bring it on !!
Here's some patches 4 FOXES ..... don't work 4 me , wrong 4-mat i think ?
They work 4 everyone but me :'(
http://mafiaowns.com/mfs/files/file_info/download.php?file=Public.rar
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Hahahahaha ..... bring it on !!
Here's some patches 4 FOXES ..... don't work 4 me , wrong 4-mat i think ?
They work 4 everyone but me :'(
http://mafiaowns.com/mfs/files/file_info/download.php?file=Public.rar
You know, it would be cool if we actually could get on the server, bust most of us can't for reasons that we all know.
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Hahahahaha ..... bring it on !!
Here's some patches 4 FOXES ..... don't work 4 me , wrong 4-mat i think ?
They work 4 everyone but me :'(
http://mafiaowns.com/mfs/files/file_info/download.php?file=Public.rar
Yeah But you must the tag ¥PPF¥ = PUBLIC PATCH FOXES , If you do'nt put this tag , You can be kicked ok?
Hvaefun :D
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Yeah But you must the tag ¥PPF¥ = PUBLIC PATCH FOXES , If you do'nt put this tag , You can be kicked ok?
Hvaefun :D
Then are your member's going 2 have ¥MPPF¥ = MEMBER PRIVATE PATCH FOXES ??
Just joking ..... but it been fun playing with you guys !!!
I'm not changing my name ......... so ALOHA :-*
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I'm not changing my name ......... so ALOHA :-*
HAHAHAH too funny
Classic 50. Love the take it or leave it style.
Ricardo gets owned yet again.
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Foxes Members no need to put the ¥PPF¥ . Because THey are already foxes -_- .
And We added this tag coz we want know who has a patch public ok? so Have good time. ;)
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HAHAHAH too funny
Classic 50. Love the take it or leave it style.
Ricardo gets owned yet again.
Well ..... did'nt want 2 fuck up my stats , 3rd. place & it would
have been another 1,000 points to move into 2nd. ::)
See .......
So much 4 stats .......
Player Name: ¥PPF¥ Ricardo
First Seen: Dec 09, 2008
Minutes: 0 Score per Minute: 0
Rank on Game Server: 16,310th out of 21,907
16,310 ranked Ricardo ..... Hahahhaha
But , i'm taking a break anyway ..... CTS is killing me :'(
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It's Just for a test....
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Just as 50 is saying, he doesn't want to change his name because he will lose his stats. I am sure he isn't the only one.
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Just as 50 is saying, he doesn't want to change his name because he will lose his stats. I am sure he isn't the only one.
Well only 3 maps are public patched ...
I will drop in now & then on the other's !!
And you're right Hell .... i'm sure other players
don't want 2 lose thier rank in the stats !!!
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Hawaii, There is just one patch publich for the moment, actually I try to put the patches but I need to fix something as take off many ammobox etc..
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Well only 3 maps are public patched ...
I will drop in now & then on the other's !!
If your gonna do that, why don't you just NOT use the patch and play all the maps under your old name :confused:
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If your gonna do that, why don't you just NOT use the patch and play all the maps under your old name :confused:
Think i care .... let them kick or ban me !!!
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Think i care .... let them kick or ban me !!!
Yh same here, im not putting a dam tag in my name to show i have the public patch, for one i cant have anymore characters in my name its maxed out and also im not lossing stats.
My personal opinion of the public patches is low any way i downloaded them tested them out and wasnt impreassed not really a reason for any one to lose their stats.
Question Ricardo: Why Do You Want People To Show That They Have Public Patches?
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Ricardo copying rs public rs patch tags..
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no u lie mf
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Well it seems like foxes is starting run off their fan base huh?
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Why don't we give retardo our old mafia patches, those are at least better then the ones he made, I suppose. MAFIA doesn't use them anyways.
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Why don't we give retardo our old mafia patches, those are at least better then the ones he made, I suppose. MAFIA doesn't use them anyways.
Oh don't be so quick to assume there monkey penis. You never know what may happen. Mafia may come back with the best server yet. Or someone in Mafia. Never count us out of the fight. Kisses my dutch lover!
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Oh don't be so quick to assume there monkey penis. You never know what may happen. Mafia may come back with the best server yet. Or someone in Mafia. Never count us out of the fight. Kisses my dutch lover!
I hope so ... but i'm having fun playing with PuErTiOgUrL :P
And don't 4-get she's my girlfriend Hellraiser !!
Check out my reply 2 her ... hehehehe
there goes that old geezer hawaii :P
Old Geezer ?
I still could show you a wild night!!
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I hope so ... but i'm having fun playing with PuErTiOgUrL :P
And don't 4-get she's my girlfriend Hellraiser !!
Check out my reply 2 her ... hehehehe
Old Geezer ?
I still could show you a wild night!!
This is mine ....
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This is mine ....
Not ......
You're 2 young & i'm 2 old :-\
But ....... check it out !!!
Yay ..... took all day , but i'm finally #2 now :o
1. ¥FOXES¥ Cheero 18572 408.05 hr
2. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 13521 335.03 hr
3. -[SL]- Le Stroumphe 13518 403.57 hr
4. ¥FOXES¥ Waffleboy 11868 147.08 hr
5. ¥FOXES¥ Payne 11416 203.32 hr
6. ¥FOXES¥ Ricardo 10223 151.5 hr
7. ¥FOXES¥ EaSyCoMpAnY 8083 111.62 hr
8. -[SL]- PaTcHaLiNo 8036 192.6 hr
9. £nd 7217 70.4 hr
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Not ......
You're 2 young & i'm 2 old :-\
But ....... check it out !!!
Yay ..... took all day , but i'm finally #2 now :o
1. ¥FOXES¥ Cheero 18572 408.05 hr
2. *MAFIA* Hawaii-50 13521 335.03 hr
3. -[SL]- Le Stroumphe 13518 403.57 hr
4. ¥FOXES¥ Waffleboy 11868 147.08 hr
5. ¥FOXES¥ Payne 11416 203.32 hr
6. ¥FOXES¥ Ricardo 10223 151.5 hr
7. ¥FOXES¥ EaSyCoMpAnY 8083 111.62 hr
8. -[SL]- PaTcHaLiNo 8036 192.6 hr
9. £nd 7217 70.4 hr
Im not too young, im 15, almost 16 and She has 18...
Rofl
Nice score Hawaii :D
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Im not too young, im 15, almost 16 and She has 18...
Rofl
Nice score Hawaii :D
Tank's .........
And i'll have you know , i wake up every mourning feeling like a 16 year old !!
But i can never find one !!!
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Im not too young, im 15, almost 16 and She has 18...
Rofl
Nice score Hawaii :D
Don't take this the wrong way Ricardo, but your balls haven't even dropped yet! Plus, you wouldn't know what to do with a girl, let alone a Puerto Rican girl. They are fucking crazy. Trust me, I have had a few, one came at me with a knife. I don't like to hit women, but I had to put her down. Then as she lay there knocked the fuck out, I had my way with her again. HAHAHAHHAHAHHA A
Oh and Hawaii, you are to old dude. She would probably kill you!!!! Also, when I wake up I feel like an older woman who drives a Cross Fire, but I can never find one. WTF? Maybe you and I should change what we are looking for. ;D
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Don't take this the wrong way Ricardo, but your balls haven't even dropped yet! Plus, you wouldn't know what to do with a girl, let alone a Puerto Rican girl. They are fucking crazy. Trust me, I have had a few, one came at me with a knife. I don't like to hit women, but I had to put her down. Then as she lay there knocked the fuck out, I had my way with her again. HAHAHAHHAHAHHA A
Oh and Hawaii, you are to old dude. She would probably kill you!!!! Also, when I wake up I feel like an older woman who drives a Cross Fire, but I can never find one. WTF? Maybe you and I should change what we are looking for. ;D
...there are sooo many things wrong with this....
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...there are sooo many things wrong with this....
Your right, The grammatical errors run throughout the entire paragraph, but the content looked OK to me. :laugh: