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*MAFIA* => Help => Topic started by: *MAFIA* KrautKiller on January 15, 2007, 08:51:01 PM
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Ok, i have a senior speech wednesday 17th i think. And i really need a good hook does anyone know of something cause im completely blank with this hook in the speech.
And its about computers...
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do a speech on how World of Warcraft is taking over the world and corrupting millions of feeble minds. It must be stopped before it completely consumes me!
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Come on this determines wither i paass 12th grade or not, and my teachers want help me :(
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do a speech on how World of Warcraft is taking over the world and corrupting millions of feeble minds. It must be stopped before it completely consumes me!
I think thats a good idea, you could talk about how people are choosing to spend more time in a virtual world than the real one and what does this say about society?
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Or that people are more willing to pay big bucks for their computers. Then say car upkeep.
Or how some people love their computer as a real person. And treat it as such.
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Ah but these people are in their 40s and work all day, i doubt they even know what wow is lol.
Im gonna go with surfers idea, but expande on it. All i need is 8 minutes of bs to get a 100 on it :D
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Come on this determines wither i paass 12th grade or not, and my teachers want help me :(
With grammar like that I wouldn't expect an excellent grade. :)
Good luck on it though, dune surfer's idea is actually a pretty simple one that you could draw out for 10 minutes if you're good at bull-shitting.
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I spelled "want" right...
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I spelled "want" right...
FUCK YOU CHRIS
and my teachers want help me
and my teachers wont help me
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its not that you spelled it wrong its how you used it
and my teachers want help me
and my teachers wont help me
lol it's now how he used it, it's wrong choice of word or he had a typo
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Remember to put an apostrophe(') in the contractions.
Wont= Won't
Cant=Can't
For the hook, I also like Dune's idea. You can add on to it by saying how much people rely on computers and technology. Give examples of possible outcomes for the good and bad side of this. Also, how has computers let mankind evolve into our form now? Good?
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Awesome i was thinking of adding onto it but couldnt think of something that i could make last awhile.
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don't use contractions. say the words. trust me it will sound better and you'll come across as more assertive.
do not use contractions. say the words. trust me. it will sound better, and you will come across as more assertive.
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don't use contractions. say the words. trust me it will sound better and you'll come across as more assertive.
do not use contractions. say the words. trust me. it will sound better, and you will come across as more assertive.
Do you always gotta be so confusing??
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Do you always gotta be so confusing??
to make it more simple, avoid using this..."don't" "didn't" "it'll." Those are called contractions, instead say "did not" or "it will."
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or just say fuck niggers
gg
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or just say fuck niggers
gg
Ha that would be a good hook lol
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Don't worry so much about the capitalization, punctuation, and grammar. You need to focus on the content, the "beef" of the paper. Once you're finished, you can go back and edit that other stuff, or send it to me and I'll fix it. Did I say that, what?
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Don't worry so much about the capitalization, punctuation, and grammar. You need to focus on the content, the "beef" of the paper. Once you're finished, you can go back and edit that other stuff, or send it to me and I'll fix it. Did I say that, what?
I put "dude" and "like" abit to many times in my paper lol